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Schoolpage Challenge 3 - Comenius College Hilversum

Page history last edited by Manon van Herwijnen 8 years, 11 months ago

Please post your school/group contribution on this page.

 

The right to grow up safe.

 

Please watch this movie made by Lucy, Caro and Iris about the children's right to grow up save:

 


 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L99Ud3hWeWI&feature=youtu.be

 


Topic 1 : A Pantoum Made by Rutger, Martijn, Thomas and Marius

 

Line 1: I feel safe

Line 2: I am at school

Line 3: I see the sun

Line 4: and I’m feeling good.

 

Line 5: I am at school

Line 6: I might be bored

Line 7: but I’m feeling good

Line 8: it makes me dance.

 

Line 9: I might me bored

Line 10: I experience love

Line 11: it makes me dance

Line 12: it’s simply the best.

 

Line 13: I experience love

Line 14: it feels amazing

Line 15: it’s simply the best

Line 16: I wanna run things.

 

Line 17: It feels amazing

Line 18: I see the sun

Line 19: I wanna run things

Line 20: I feel safe

 

After our May break we are going to make a rap of these lines!

 

 

 

 


Topic 2 :

 

Comenius College

Bisonlaan 1

1217 GH HILVERSUM

 

Hilversum, 24/04/15

 

Ambassade van Mexico

Nassauplein 28

2585 EC DEN HAAG

 

Subject: Bad situation for children

 

Dear Enrique Peña Nieto, leader of Mexico,

 

For a schoolproject we have to fight for childrenrights in other countries where the situation for children is really bad. To introduce ourselfs, we are five children from the Netherlands and we have heard about the drugwar in Mexico,  the war between the drug cartels and the government. We hope you will solve this problem quickly because there are a few reasons that we want to tell you something about.

 

Right now, a lot of people die unnecessarily, not only adults but unfortunately also a lot of children. This is very sad and unbelievable and this situation should be solved soon.

Children are not able to play outside because it is very dangerous out there. We think every child has the right to play outside. At this moment, a lot of children in Mexico cannot do that.

 

We hope that we convinced you to change this situation as quickly as possible.

 

Yours sincerely,

 

Britt van Walderveen

Koen Pruijn

Kim Coenradi

Gaetano Budding

Dewi Vagevuur

 

( From the Comenius College, Hilversum )

 

 


Topic 3 :

 

Rosalie, Jasper, Marcus, Sem en Matthijs 4V

 

Parts of the world where children can’t live in safety, caused by conflicts in their country.

 

Since our May holiday is about to start we don’t have time to make a 3-dimensional map.

However we have found a practical solution in this map that we found on the internet.

It provides all the relevant information in an accurate way!

 

For extra information on the various area’s click on:

 

http://www.conflictmap.org/map

 


 

 

Comments (1)

Natasha Cherednichenko said

at 11:39 am on Apr 30, 2015

Dear participants,
thank you for the creative approach and usage different tools to presentation Challenge 2 results.Well done!

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